i found the concept of the story interesting. it isnt like those cliche Apocalypse novel where mc returns back to past and eats the crystal found inside the head of a zombie( which people are totally fine to eat something that is inside the brain of a rotting, gross zombie. no hesitation at all for cannibalism) to get stronger. the one major problem for this novel is grammar. along with several gramatical errors, the author used many words without even knowing the meaning of it which makes the whole sentence sound totally weird. i'd say just use simple words to write your story. correct and simple sentences are worth far more than sentences with fancy words that doesnt make any sense. and i would like to suggest that you edit your starting chapters. if your starting is bad then many people wont bother reading your novel and search for another one. i suggest using grammarly for solving gramatical errors.overall id say the story is interesting but bad grammar puts it off. dropping it now( as of ch 6) but maybe will pick it up in future if the author polishes the starting chapters
Honestly the synopsis makes this look like Mc is a federation dog who has it not necessary to work there bur still chose to with a stupid excuse that he earns money.(Look at MC'S ability he has if not necessary)
I don't abide by political bull**** in my light novels. Lots of Japan hate. Could've used a fictional country with a fictional reason for animosity, and I'd be more inclined to continue reading it. Wolfy the translator does a bang up job. no errors in grammar and Wolfy places notes indicating that the story itself is to blame for a lot of the inconsistencies. Thanks Wolfy, but **** this author and his Hate.
1 star story development. MC has been there for years but once he got the system Enemies suddenly pops outs and starts messing with MC.They have years to get the garden when MC entered the sect. like i would imagine snaching from a newbie would be way easier right.Also it is protrayed that the Wang clan has this grand plan years in the making.Why don’t they get the garden when they had the chance?Story has a lot of plot holes.Translation is 2 stars as there’s some miss translation like Catties turned into tonne…Story background 2 stars cuz meh and it is drag down by the poorly thought out plotline.Character design is 2 stars cuz it’s MC starts learning into the trouble seeking MC category. we all know the problem with the trouble seeking MCs right?MC would deliberately be provocative inorder to drive the plot. Someone makes trouble? MC kills it! Then the master shows up to mess with the MC for killing deciple. It all happens simply because the MC simply cant be polite
I love the MC and other characters are actually living breathing people with their own problems and personality. The world settings is still been revealed as the novel is still at its initial stages overall it has potential but my only problem is the Romance I'd rather have no romance than forced romance the MC has never had a good opinion of Qin Yan she's beautiful and talented but that's it countless other females in the sect possess the exact same qualities but the MC has never been shown as one chasing after beauty. Yet she gave him an ultimatum with even asking for his opinion . Yet the next moment he has her name been mentioned he couldn't help but send her a letter ???????? Pls Don't ruin this great novel with bland tasteless romance . A great novel is not defined by the number of jade skined beauties chasing after the MC or by the number of girls the MC has slept with . Pls author don't go down that road...
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I love it so far!!!! I am glad I downloaded this app. It has great stories such as this one Silent Crown. I am so intrigued with the plot. I woknder what is going to happen next. I just can't wait.
I was lucky to find this novel, it's a true hidden gem. (the novel is at 40 chapters when i write this review)What i like about it is the realism. There are no superpower or black technology. The MC is not a super genius how can predict what the enemy will eat next week because of one of his action. Or a sociopath who will do anything and sacrifice everyone to achieve a goal.The second think i like is the description of the environment. What i mean by that is that you can feel and imagine the world of the MC really easily. You just have to read the first chapter to understand what i mean immediately. One of the best beginning i ever read.Finally, the characters. The only think a can say about them is that what we don't have in quantity, we have in quality. And to somebody who always forgets names like me, it's a godsend.
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